the loud creaking of the pilings
Michael Eisenstadt
michaele@ando.pair.com
Sat Oct 18 15:54:02 2003
Frances Morey wrote:
>
> The boat "careens" off the pilings? No?
No
Jon Ford wrote:
> Career is mainly used with horses-- maybe
> "careen" would be better, as it is a nautical
> term.
to careen is to lay a boat on its side for cleaning of
a fouled bottom.
to career is "to move at full speed...turning this way
and that" (shorter OED)
I wrote:
> the boat gently careers off the wooden pilings left
> and right and fetches up to the landing with a barely
> perceptable bump.
Jon Ford again:
> Anyway, the sentence has a macabre cast in the light
> of the recent catastrophe on the Staten Island Ferry.
???????
> Is it a quote from the Times?
No
I wrote:
> the boat gently careers off the wooden pilings left
> and right and fetches up to the landing with a barely
> perceptable bump.
amanuensis Mike